Finished piece of work
This is our completed piece of work. We editied it and rendered it in Final Cut Pro 7. Additionally, when we rendered it we did two separtae files. We rendered one which was full resoultion and that was the piece that we submitted. Then we rendered a different version that was an iPhone preset that we uploaded to our blog.
Good use of continuity techniques, making this a clear pass. Good cutaway in the exchange and generally good use of framing. Good sense of flow, and pace - especially towards the end when Sam's character moves to the computer. Cut to Elliot's character leaving is well constructed too, and works well to create enigma. Good end shot! Well done to you all!
ReplyDeleteThere is a jump cut which I think is probably unintentional when Elliot's character sits down. Be careful about this as it can create discontinuity where it's not appropriate.